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Literature Text
I saved you
from suffering,
transferred your
pain unto me.
Hear my fluttering
heart's cry
of love.
Don't let me break.
I gave
and gave
yet never
received.
Memories cut in half,
No more.
You can never be forgotten.
No longer I
feel for you.
Stop whispering
poisonous words
unto my brain.
You are so hollow.
Leave me broken.
I want to feel again,
The hurt of another,
No longer yours.
Give unto me
the life you
ripped apart,
just like a
paper heart.
from suffering,
transferred your
pain unto me.
Hear my fluttering
heart's cry
of love.
Don't let me break.
I gave
and gave
yet never
received.
Memories cut in half,
No more.
You can never be forgotten.
No longer I
feel for you.
Stop whispering
poisonous words
unto my brain.
You are so hollow.
Leave me broken.
I want to feel again,
The hurt of another,
No longer yours.
Give unto me
the life you
ripped apart,
just like a
paper heart.
something that just came to me last night. Let me know what you think.
Also, if you have a photo that you think might work for this, tell me, ill take a look.
Picture/Photograph done by *lexidh. Thank her for letting me use it!
Also, if you have a photo that you think might work for this, tell me, ill take a look.
Picture/Photograph done by *lexidh. Thank her for letting me use it!
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I really like this poem! The idea and metaphor is great! And also the way you've spaced it out just makes it nice and easy to read 
nice work
nice work